话题写作01 人物介绍篇.pptxVIP

书面表达;【话题点睛】 针对名人或周围熟悉的同学、朋友或家人进行描写。主要涉及人物的经历、变化或自己对该人物的看法等方面。;[要求] (1)词数:80—100,可适当发挥(开头已给出,不计入总词数); (2)短文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等信息。 A Famous British Nurse—Florence Nightingale Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse. 【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:主题是介绍南丁格尔的生平。文章主要围绕时间线展开。 2.确定时态:一般过去时 3.确定人称:第三人称;【写作架构】;【基础写作】 Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。) 1.她于1820年5月12日出生在一个富有的家庭。(be born) She 　　　　　　　　in a rich family on May 12, 1820. ? 2.她很热心并且总是乐于帮助他人,尤其是病人。(be always ready to do) She was kind-hearted and 　　　　　　　　　　　　help others, 　 　　　the sick.? 3.在1851年,她被??练为一名护士。(be trained as) In 1851 she 　　　　　　　　　　　　a nurse.? 4.后来她创办了世界上第一所护士学校。(open) Later she 　　　　　the worlds 　　　　　nurse 　　　　.? 5.在1974年,因为她给人们的爱和帮助,她的生日变成了国际护士节。(because of) In 1974, her 　　 　　became International Nurse Day 　　　　　　　　the great love and help she gave to people.?;Ⅱ.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。) 1.She went to help in the front hospital. She saved many soldiers lives. (用and将两句合并为一个并列句) 2.She came back after the war. She became a national hero. (合并为含有由when引导的时间状语从句的复合句) 3.She was a great nurse. (改写为由what引导的感叹句);【连句成文】 A Famous British Nurse—Florence Nightingale Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse. She was born in a rich family on May 12, 1820. She was kind-hearted and always ready to help others, especially the sick. In 1851 she was trained as a nurse. During the war, she went to help in the front hospital and saved many soldiers lives. When she came back after the war, she became a national hero. Later Florence Nightingale opened the worlds first nurse school. Florence Nightingale died in London in 1910.In 1974, her birthday became International Nurse Day because of the great love and help she gave to people. What a great nurse she was!;拓展积累;【亮点句型】 人物外貌 1.My favourite teacher is a 30-year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. 2.She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. 3.A big smile can always be found on her round face. 4.She always wears a smile.