20181027雅思满分范文定稿.pdfVIP

考试真题 Some people think that young people should spend more and more of their free time with their families, and spend less time entertaining outside. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 题目分析 家庭是永恒的主题，但在雅思考试中涉及家庭关系的题目并不常出现，本次题目探 讨年轻人是否应该多与家人在一起。传统观点可能认为家庭为主，尤其是成长于重视家 庭的传统文化中，但西方文化中积极探索外面的世界也是成长的重要一环，本次的范文 就分别从这两方面阐述观点，最后强调要注重两者之间的平衡。 范文示例 Introduction Family is the cornerstone of civilisation (文明的基石) and remains the Background bedrock of many societies (社会的根基) across the world, where sentence family values (家庭价值) are at the heart of national identity (民族认同 的核心). In the Western world, as the family unit (家庭单位) no longer has the Rephrase the same resonance (具有共鸣) it once did, fewer people regard family as topic important. Increasingly, young people are valuing other relationships instead. 译文 家庭是文明的基石，也是世界上许多社会的根基，家庭价值是民族认 背景句 同的核心。 西方世界中，由于家庭单位不再像以前那样具有共鸣，很少有人认为 改写题目 家庭是重要的。越来越多的年轻人开始重视其他关系。 Body paragraph 1 It is certainly important for young people to spend time with their Idea family, in order to develop a sense of emotional security (培养一种情 感安全). Children who have emotionally distant parents (父母感情疏离) are Reason more likely to grow up with psychological disorders (心理问题) than (Why) those who come from stable, loving homes (家庭稳定有爱). In that sense, it is vital for young people to make time to spend with Further explain family. Additionally, family can provide practical support (实际支持) for young Additional people, so it is important for children to value family relationships (重 information 视家庭关系