九年级英语全册Unit6Whenwasitinvented同步作文指导新版人教新目标版.pptVIP

写作题目： Computer age Learning aim Talk about the usage of computers and your ideas on them. Have you seen these inventions? When talk about the most important invention of the world, what comes to your mind first? Telephones ____________in 1876. They___________ call people. (用途) were invented are used to Our life has become___________________________ (convenient) since cars were invented. __________, cars cause a lot of air pollution for us. more and more convenient However advantages disadvantages Our life ______________________ (已经大大改变）_____________ （因为） the inventions of computers. We can______________ (上网）on computers. We can_______________(购物)on the Internet and so on. But if we spend ________________(太多时间）on computers, it will be bad for our study. go shopping because of too much time has greatly changed get on the Internet 电脑问世以来，大大改变了人们的生活。请围绕下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文谈谈电脑对我们生活的影响。倡议同学们恰当使用电脑。 提示： 发明时间：1976年 最有用的发明之一 ，如玩游戏、写文章、听音乐…… 利用电脑上网，购物，聊天…… 长时间使用电脑对视力及学习有害…… 参考词汇：get on the Internet上网，eyesight 视力 in the right way恰当的方式 审-列-加-连-美 Think（审题） 体裁：______ 人称:__________时态: __________ List（用简单句列出文章的要点） The usage of computers Advantages Disadvantages 说明文 第三、一人称 一般现在时 Add（加开头，结尾使文章完整） Connect(使用关联词，从句，过渡词） Beautify(使用好词好句美化文章） Add 介绍产品用途 Computers are used in/for… Computers can help…do… 点明主题 Computers are one of the most useful inventions in the world. 结尾 I think… 连词:as (everyone knows), before, after, when, if, because… 过渡词：however, besides, also, what’s more 表示列举的词：for example, such as, 总结性的短语，句子：in my opinion, in a word , in short, in general, I think… 审-列-加-连-美 The most useful invention—computer In the past few years, more and more inventions have come into our life. I think computers are one of the most useful inventions. We live in the “computer age”. Computers are used in many fields. They are very important because they can work faster and make nearly no mistakes. Computers can help people do a lot of wor