SAT写作例子1：林肯直接背诵版本.docVIP

南京 SAT教学 白松 博客： /u/2803090034 人人：/245418607 对应话题： 苦难与成功； 努力运气； 动力价值观 First of all, it is one’s initial failures, far more than the smooth way toward a bright future, that motivate us to change. Such an idea can be exemplified by the legendary life experience of Abraham Lincoln, the former President of the United States. Staggering on his way toward his dream, Abraham Lincoln suffered a lot from failures and rejection from others. Such a negative circumstance even isolated him from his friends and family, pushing him to the very verge of despair and desperation. At that time, the only way that Lincoln could apply to proceed his life, it seems, is to surrender to his fate by giving up his dreams. However, even under this situation, Abraham still cherished his belief toward his dream and happiness, making all his efforts to ameliorate/enhance his oratory skills. Despite the countless defeats during his elections, he, instead of compromising, persisted and filled the hope into the mind of himself by providing his audiences with extraordinarily rousing and remarkably convincing arguments. Sometimes, even when (he was) desperately cornered, he never rejected the persistence until he was successfully elected as the President of the United States. His exceptional experience has impressed his fellow Americans and people from all around the world, stimulating them to march forward on their way to success. Because of this, he was also coined as the symbol of triumph and persistence.（230字） 短例子： Another case in point concerns Abraham Lincoln, the former President of the United States, who found motivation to change after his initial loss in a local election in Illinois. After losing, he worked hard to improve his oratory skills. At a later stage in his political career, he became known to all Americans as a role model of his extraordinarily rousing speeches and remarkably convincing arguments. It would not be wrong to imply that had not he suffered a great deal from his formerl