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General Review
Topic Writing One :
Description of a person
(描述)
临汾市第一实验中学 刘倩
话题解读:
人物描写是课标24个话题中第一个话题,也是记叙文中常见的写作类型。内容既可以是介绍自己可以是描写他人。此类话题需要对人物进行全方位的描写,并且需要在结尾处简单做一个小结,同时要考虑具体写作要求,突出重点。
So, how to describe(描写) a person?
Unit 9 Grade 7 Ⅱ
Unit 3 Grade 8 Ⅰ
Unit 4 Grade 9 Ⅰ
中考备考
话题整合复习之——
话题写作训练一:人物描写
Teaching Goals: 3 writing skills
学会让你的句式“多”起来
(简单句→复合句)
2. 学会让你的句子“长”起来
(短句→ 长句)
3. 学会仿写 (难点)
An Example:
你们学校校团委准备在教师节举行征文活动,请根据以下提示,回想自己在初中生活最喜欢的一位老师,以“My Favorite Teacher”为题,用英语写一篇80词以上的短文。
内容包括:1. 对老师外形性格的描写 2. 喜欢老师的原因(写出自己的一次亲身经历)3. 可适当发挥
写前(pre-writing)基本分析
1. 结构 ① beginning (外貌、性格) ② body (经历) ③ ending (小结)
2. 时态: ① beginning (外貌、性格)一般现在时
② body (经历) 一般过去时
③ ending (小结) 一般现在时
3. 人称:I 、she/he
An example:
My Favorite Teacher
My favorite teacher is Miss Yang. She has a round face . She is of medium height. She is talented in music. She sings very well. She is patient with us.
Once in a music class, she taught us a difficult song. It was so hard that I couldn’t sing it well, so it made me really down. At that time, Miss Yang knew that and came to me. She told me “Don’t worry, I will help you” . Then she taught me again and again until I learned to sing it. However, it was already lunch time.
From then on, I know that I should regard her as(把…当作) my model(榜样). I should be patient in my study.
beginning
body
ending
My favorite teacher is Miss Yang. She has a round face . She is of medium height. She is talented in music. She sings very well. She is patient with us.
My favorite teacher is Miss Yang.
She has a round face.
She is of medium height.
My favorite teacher is Miss Yang.
She is of medium height and has a round face.
1. 让 你的句式“多”起来(简单句→复合句)
My favorite teacher, Miss Yang, is of medium
height and has a round face.
Practice
1. My best friend is Tom.
He is a student.
He is 16 years old.
He likes running.
1. My best friend Tom,
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