医学英语写作和翻译-Part-3-引言的内容和写作.pptVIP

医学英语写作与翻译Medical English writing and translation Part 3. 引言的内容与写作 H.Y.Wang Part 3. 引言的内容与写作 ?引言写作步骤（漏斗式：funnel model, 由4步组成） Part 3. 引言的内容与写作 ?引言写作的细节 Part 3. 引言的内容与写作 ? 引言写作实例 例1. Transfusion-related acute lung injury: a clinical review (Cited from Lancet, 2013; 382:984-94) Introduction ①Transfusion-related acute lung injury (TRALI), defined as the onset of respiratory distress after blood transfusion, has long been regarded as a rare complication of transfusion medicine.1 ②However, in the past decade, perspective has changed. ③Development of an international consensus de?nition has aided TRALI research, yielding a higher incidence in speci?c patient populations than previously acknowledged.2,3 ④Patients su?ering from a clinical disorder such as sepsis are increasingly recognised as being at risk for development of TRALI.4 ⑤Thereby, from a diagnosis by exclusion, TRALI has become the leading cause of transfusion-related mortality.2,3,5,6 ⑥However, the syndrome is still under diagnosed and under-reported in some countries.7–9 [Sentences 1 to 6: Introduction to the information that is known] Part 3. 引言的内容与写作 ⑦Although blood transfusion can be life saving, it can also be a life-threatening intervention. ⑧Physicians use blood transfusion on a daily basis. ⑨Increased awareness of the risks of this procedure is needed, because management of patient-tailored transfusion could reduce the risk of TRALI. ⑩Such an individualised approach is now possible as insight into TRALI risk factors evolves. 11Furthermore, proper reporting of TRALI could prevent recurrence. 12In this Review, we discuss the pathogenesis, incidence, risk factors, and clinical picture of TRALI. 13We also outline existing strategies to mitigate the syndrome, and the remaining clinical challenges ahead. [Sentences 7 to 11: Introduction to the information