2017年秋浙江省初二英语上册unit1wheredidyougoonvacation（第7课时）同步作文指导课件（人教新目标版）.pptVIP

* 八年级上册英语（浙江专用） 第七课时 单元同步作文指导 Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation? 本单元以“谈论节假日活动”为话题展开，要求学生们会运用一般过去时态写一篇自己的旅行日记。日记属于典型的记叙文，首先要注意其格式，其次在写作时要注意时间、地点、人物、经过、结果等。同时要注意主次分明，详略得当，在结尾处最好表达出自己的感受。 教材中出现的相关句型： ①I went to Guizhou with my family.我和我家人去了贵州。 ②We took quite a few photos there.我们在那里拍了相当多的照片。 ③It was my first time there，so everything was really interesting.这是我第一次到那儿，所以一切都真的很有趣。 ④I bought something for my parents.我给我父母买了一些东西。 ⑤It was sunny and hot.天气晴朗并且炎热。 ⑥It was so wonderful/exciting.那太精彩了/太激动人心了。 ⑦I felt...我感到…… 拓展常用句型： ①The food there was delicious and the people there were very friendly.那里的食物很美味，那里的人很友好。 ②We/I had a good time there.我们/我在那里玩得很开心。 经典范文展示： 上个月2号(8月2号)，周五，天气晴朗，你和父母去北京观光旅游，参观了以下几个地方，玩得非常开心。 要求：1.写一篇英语日记，注意格式；2.词数不少于60。 Friday，August 2ndSunny The weather was sunny and warm.I went to Beijing with my parents on vacation.①It was my first time there，so everything was really interesting.We visited three places and took quite a few photos.②First we went to Tiananmen Square.③It was beautiful.④Then we went to the Palace Museum，we saw many old things there，⑤it was cool.⑥In the afternoon，we went to the Great Wall.We saw many beautiful things from the top.⑦It was great and exciting，I think.We had a good time there. 【点评】日记就是把自己当天经历的有意义的事以及见闻感受记录下来，通常用第一人称来写，且时态为一般过去时。注意日记的格式：正文上方自左起写上星期几、日期和天气情况，正文另起一行。写作时，要注意必须按照时间顺序来描述当天的活动，这样会显得层次分明、有条理性。如②④⑥处。在写作过程中，不要忘记写出自己的真实感受，如①③⑤⑦处。灵活运用各种所学句型，使文章显得更加生动。 热点作文练习： 假如你是Laura，上周六你到乡村度过了有意义的一天。你想把你这一天的情况和你的美国朋友Dolly分享一下。请根据下面所给提示词，用英语写一封电子邮件，向她描述你的这一天。 提示词：cool and sunny，start at 8：00，visit a farm，fly a kite，go boating 要求：80词左右，可适当发挥(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Dolly， It was cool and sunny last Saturday.My father and I decided to visit the countryside.We started at 8：00 in the morning.We enjoyed the clean air and beautiful flowers along the way.At about 10：00，we visited a farm.We fed some sheep，milked a cow and rode a horse on the farm.In the afternoon，we flew a kite and went boating. It was an exciting day.I had a great time