Unit 3 Inventors and inventions Period 3　Grammar Writing 人教版选修8课件.pptVIP

【参考范文】 Dear Mr.Zhang， We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. Some are for the idea.As they know, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts. Therefore, they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship. In addition, top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefits them all. However, others dont hold the same view. They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class, breaking school rules, which may lead to them forming the bad habits. Besides, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies. In my opinion, Id like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together. Yours， Li Ping 【亮点展示】 本文要点齐全，语句通顺，语言流畅，语意连贯。文章综合运用多种句式，如宾语从句“We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.”的使用，非限制性定语从句“As they know, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses.”和“They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class, breaking school rules, which may lead to them forming the bad habits.”及高级词汇如therefore，in addition，however，besides等的运用也使得文章提升了一个档次。 【写作模板】 一、开头段 1．告知对方你的身份(假如对方不认识你) Dear Sir/Mr.King， I was a student at your college, enrolled in Philosophy Department. I am a．..at your... I am a．..at your college, enrolled in the...course. My name is..., I am... 2．问候收信人(假如他/她是你的朋友) Dear King， Hello. Hi. How are you? I hope everything is fine. How are things going with you? How are you getting on in...? 3. 解释写信的原因 (1)致谢 Thank you for your letter about studying in Canada. I am writing to you to express my heartfelt gratitude. I am writing to tell