2009年6月英语四级作文预测及范文(四)（英语四级作文）.docVIP

2009年6月英语四级作文预测及范文(四)（英语四级作文） Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below: 　　1)父母都会望子成龙，但是父母的期望有时候会与他们孩子的理想发生矛盾 　　2)分析这种矛盾产生的原因 　 　　3)应该如何解决这一矛盾 　　Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals _______________________________________________________________________________ 　　_______________________________________________________________________________ 　　_______________________________________________________________________________ 　　行文思路 　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析这一问题产生的原因，提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述父母的期望和孩子的理想之间的矛盾;分析这种矛盾产生的主要原因;说明解决这一矛盾的办法。 　　高分范文 　　Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals 　　All parents hope their children will have a bright future. However, parents’ expectations for their children are not always [1]in accordance with their children’s personal ideals, [2]and sometimes they are even conflicting with each other. This is often a main cause for quarrels and gaps between parents and children. [3]But what lead to the conflict between parental hopes and personal ideals? 　　[3]The following three factors contribute to the conflict. [4]First of all, in this fast-changing society, parents and children have too many differences in mind. [4]Secondly, traditional patriarchy is still influencing Chinese parents in modern society. They are used to making decisions for their children. [4]Third, nowadays young people have strong independence, [5]who want to plan their own future and control their own destiny. [4]Thus the conflict between parents and children inevitably appear. 　　[6]In order to solve the conflict, both parents and children should pay their efforts. [4]For one thing, parents should give their children rights to make their own decisions. They may help their children make choices [7]instead of replacing the