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400字作文有过渡句 　　作文中常用的过渡句 　　作文中常用句型和过渡词 　　句子及段落的连贯性要求恰当地使用关联词，也叫过渡词。段落是否连贯主要取决于文章内容是否符合逻辑，但是段落缺乏连贯性并不仅仅是逻辑顺序问题，过度词语也起着十分重要的作用。试比较： 　　(1)Nowadays there is a lack of understanding between parent and child. (2)Parents complain that their children’s behavior is often ueasonable. (3)Children complain that their parents are too old-fashioned. (4)When a child has a problem, he will not tell his parents. (5)He will go to his friends instead. 　　(1)Nowadays there is a lack of understanding between parent and child. (2)Parents often complain about their children’s “ueasonable” behavior, while children usually think their parents are too “old-fashioned”. (3)Then when a child has a problem, he usually goes to his intimate friends for sympathy and advice, leaving his parents totally in the dark. 　　比较： 　　1. 增加过渡词While，一方面强化了两代人之间互不理解的对立关系，另有一方面将句和句浓缩成一个句子，避免了雷同句式罗列造成的平庸感。由 Then引出结尾句，增强连贯性。 　　2. 句分词短语leaving?充当表示结果的状语，将初稿中的句和合并为一个句子，增加了句式变化。To leave?in the dark意思是“使?蒙在鼓里”是一个习语。作文中如能出现一两个习语，不仅能使文章有闪光的语言点，而且显得文章地道。 　　3. 初稿中complain 后的that从句改成complain about，使得语言更简练。 　　熟练掌握一些过渡词： 　　1. 表示叙述顺序：first,?second,?,/firstly,?secondly,?lastly,?/ to begin with,?, next?,finally?/ 　　2. 补充，递进：besides,/ moreover/ furthermore/in addition/ what is more/most important of all/last but not least/worse still/to make matter worse 　　例：The house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/besides/what’s more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location. 　　3. 结果，原因： since / because /for /due to/ owing to/ so/ therefore/ consequently/ thus/ as a result/ as a consequence/ for this reason/ thanks to/ with the help of 　　4. 对照，对比，转折，让步：even though/ in spite of that/ however/ but/ regardless of ?/ as opposed to this?/ nevertheless/ while/ on the contrary/ on the one hand?on the other hand 　　It is hard work; I enjoy it though. 　　Contrary to what I had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun. 　　5. 举例：for instance/ for example/ take?for example/ such as/ like/ namely/ that is to say 　　6.