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高中英语 [感悟范文] 某国际动物关爱协会面向全球中学生招募“动物代言人”，希望申请者选择一种自己喜欢的动物，为之代言(speak for)。假设你是重庆新华中学的学生李华，有意参与该活动。现请你用英文在线填写申请表(仅需填写“申请陈述”部分)，内容如下： ●表示有意参加； ●说明自己富有爱心、关爱动物； ●打算为何种动物代言，并说明理由； ●希望申请成功。 Application Form (申请表) 注意：1. 词数100个左右； 2. “申请陈述”的第一句已经给出，不计入总词数。 [范文] I_am_a_student_from_Xinhua_Middle_School_in_Chongqing,_China.① I would like to be a spokesman for animals to try my best to protect them. I like animals very much and I ② have a loving heart for animals, especially polar bears. So I want to ③ speak for polar bears. Nowadays, the balance of nature④ is being destroyed and the weather is getting warmer and warmer. ⑤ Whats worse, some people kill polar bears for their own sake. ⑥As a consequence, the number of polar bears is becoming smaller and smaller. ⑦ So, in order to increase peoples awareness of protecting polar bears, I ⑧apply for the spokesman for polar bears sincerely. ⑨I do hope I can be chosen as a spokesman for polar bears. ⑩I would really appreciate it if you can accept my application. [技法讨论] 当一个人想得到某种机会或某些东西，如申请加入某个组织、参加某项活动、得到奖学金、求学、申请出国签证等，往往通过申请信来提出请求。 此类信件的写作需遵循以下步骤和原则： 1．提出请求：申请信开篇应点明主题，即申请的具体内容，语言要简练。 2．说明原因：也就是说明提出此申请的原因。要求对自己的情况和所具备的申请条件做一简要介绍。这一部分为申请信的主体，需重点明确，论述充分。 3．再次表明自己的意愿，请求回复并表示感谢：信的最后请求回复并表示感谢时，应该采用礼貌、诚恳的措辞。 [黄金表达] 1. I have learned that you are hiring... 2. I wonder if you could tell me the information about... 3. I am writing for the information about... 4. I would like to apply for... 5. I am interested in a．..position in your firm. 6. I would like to know whether you can provide me with information regarding. 7. I would appreciate an interview at your convenience. 8. I look forward to your immediate response. 9. I am waiting for your quick reply. 10. Thank you in advance for your assistance. [亮点分析] 亮点一：文章思路清晰，布局合理，表意明确。第一自然段表达申请意愿，第二自然段写出申请理由及决心。 亮点二：文章使用了⑤whats worse，⑥as a consequence，⑦so等连接词语，使文章过渡自然，行文流畅。 亮点三：大量语法结构的恰当使用，如：①I would like to...；④进行时被动语态；⑨I do hope...强调谓语；⑩I would really appreciate it if...等，这些都是文章的增分亮点