外研社高中英语必修1M2.pptVIP

写作要点： 1．表明自己的看法； 2．陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)； 3．提出至少两条建议 要求： 1．短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2．短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。 3．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。 _________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Hi，TigerMom， What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so. ①Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and their future university admission，development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us.Some all－A students in school have turned out not to be not successful in society as they were expected. ②The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. ③Furthermore，punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically. ④So I suggest that you take your friends advice.More importantly，let her live like a lovely girl；let her have more friends and social activities；and let her make decisions of her own as we teenagers often do. 【高级词汇】 evaluate评估；评价　　　ignore忽略；忽视 furthermore此外；再者 by no means绝不是；绝非 【佳句变换】  We all know that high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and their future university admission，but never should development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude be ignored.  This is because the pressure from their parents leads to the lack of time for other activities.  The fact is that well never expect punishment will help them grow up mentally and physically.  As far as Im concerned，youd better follow your friends advice. 8．organised adj.有组织的；有系统的→organise vt.组织→organisation n．组织 9．patient adj.耐心的 n．病人→patiently adv.耐心地→patience n．耐心 10．strict adj.严格的；严厉的→strictly adv.严格地 11．immediately adv.立即，即刻→immediate adj.立即的，立刻的；(作用)直接的 12．appreciate vt.感激→appreciation n．感激；欣赏 13．respect vt. n．尊敬；尊重→respectful adj.表示尊敬的；有礼貌的→respectable adj.受尊敬的；体面的 14．relaxed adj.轻松的；松懈的；宽松的→relax v．(使)轻松→relaxation n．放松；轻松 15．simila