格式塔意象在类比语篇翻译中再造.pptxVIP

格式塔意象在类比语篇翻译中的再造 ——以TEM8(2013)汉译英试题为例 邵惟韺 邵志洪（华东理工大学外国语学院）;汉语原文;1、词汇语义层面 2、句法结构层面 3、篇章层面;词汇语义层面 1，译文词语语义选择不精确 一杯 a cup of, a mug of, a glass of, a goblet of, a vessel of, a trophy of 酒 Wine , alcohol , beer, whisky, vodka 红酒 red wine 一杯红酒 （错）a cup of red beer （正）a glass/trophy of red wine 2, 词语选择错误 抿一口 Drink a bit , drink a sip, drink a gulp (a mouthful), drink a mouth;句法结构层面 一，逻辑关系的隐和显 句（1）（因为）生活就像一杯红酒，热爱生活的人会从其中品出无穷无尽的美妙。（因果关系隐性） （逻辑关系显性） As life is like a glass of red wine, those who love life can taste the endless beauty from it. （逻辑关系隐性） Life is like a glass of red wine. Those who love life can taste the endless beauty from it. ;比较关系不符的两种情况 句（5）（就如）红酒越陈越美味，生活越丰富越美好（比较关系） 1，译文比较关系相反 The order the wine is, the tastier it will be. Just as the more colorful your life is, the more you will enjoy your life. （红酒越陈越美味，就如生活越丰富越美好） 2，译文比较关系错误 The longer time the wine has been stored, the more diverse and wonderful life becomes.（红酒越陈，生活就越丰富美好） ;比较关系相符的两种情况 就如）红酒越陈越美味，生活越丰富越美好（比较关系） Just as red wine tastes better as years pass by , life becomes better as your experiences accumulate.（显性） For red wine, the taste grows with time. For life, the richness brings more beautifulness.（隐性）;二，比喻关系在句法结构层面翻译中的隐和显 句（2）将它握在手里仔细观察，它的暗红色中有血的感觉，那正是生命的痕迹。（暗喻） Hold it in hand, and you will see by close observation blood in its dark redness, which is just like the trace of life. （明喻） Hold it in hand, and you will see by close observation blood in its dark redness, which is just the trace of life. （暗喻）;篇章层面 一， 指代关系在篇章层面翻译中的再造 句（1）生活就像一杯红酒，热爱生活的人会从其（生活）???品出无穷无尽的美妙。 Life is like a glass of red wine. Those who love life can taste the endless wonder from the red wine。 Life is like a glass of red wine. Those who love life can taste the endless wonder from it. (life) 注意：尽量保持原文的指代关系，但是不要过分的还原原文的指代关系; 句（1）Life is like a glass of red wine, and those who love life can savour the endless wonder from it. 句（2）Holding the glass for a careful observation of the wine, you