第十五讲举例与细分托福进阶三十讲阅读写作篇.ppt

“举例”是论述的一种方法 “positive or nagetive”论述方向，作者的态度是不会变的 被证明的总是论述方向，如“WP” is good 证明的总是细节 判定细节的方法：是被证明还是证明别人 举例是细节，定义也可能是细节 这句话其实是给“applied arts”下定义 但是后面写的是“craft”的分类，没有继续阐述applied art，因此这也是一个细节，所以不选 不需要的被说的属于细节，如上PPT 1、前后句有明显的从属关系 2、保证了论述方向的一致性（而且上下句在开头就标注了论述对象，非常清楚，详见下张PPT） 在要举2个以上例子的时候，建议使用 比如我先举了一个例子用了for instance，再用就重复了 准备上课啦? * * 托福进阶三十讲（阅读写作篇）（千词百练篇）Jan. 8 同学们请确认我的声音清晰/无回声 文勇 微信：liuwenyonglasedu2 * * * 回头 回头 对观点的论述 塑造观点 定义 阐述 … … 回头 对观点的论述 塑造观点 以小见大 举例 细分 … … 回头 有标志词 For example, For instance, like 无标志词 ? 回头 举例的本质 回头 minor/举例是一个相对概念 回头 举例的习题运用 * PASSAGE EXCERPT: “In the animal world the task of moving about is fulfilled in many ways. For some animals locomotion is accomplished by changes in body shape.” OG Example The word locomotion in the passage is closest in meaning to A. evolution B. movement C. survival D. escape In the animal world the task of moving about fulfilled in many ways For some animals locomotion accomplished changes in body shape PASSAGE EXCERPT: “Sensitivity to physical laws is thus an important consideration for the maker of applied-art objects. It is often taken for granted that this is also true for the maker of fine-art objects. This assumption misses a significant difference between the two disciplines. Fine-art objects are not constrained by the laws of physics in the same way that applied-art objects are. Because their primary purpose is not functional, they are only limited in terms of the materials used to make them. Sculptures must, for example, be stable, which requires an understanding of the properties of mass, weight distribution, and stress. Paintings must have rigid stretchers so that the canvas will be taut, and the paint must not deteriorate, crack or discolor. These are problems that must be overcome by the artist because they tend to intrude upon his or her conception of the work. For example, in the early Italian Renaissance, bronze statues of horses with a raised foreleg usually had a cannonball under tha