大学英语四-1教师用书.doc

Unit 1 Part Ⅰ Writing A. 四、六级作文 观点子类模版(对立观点) 1. 写作流程 ①第一种人的观点。需要起始句。 ②第二种人的观点。第一句为过渡句，简明。 ③明确自己喜欢哪种观点。 2. 经典模版 Outline: 1. 有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为… 2. 有些人喜欢经常换工作，因为… 3. 我的看法。 My View on Job-hopping People’s opinions are always different once they talk about job-hopping. Those who never change their job throughout their life maintain that they have accumulated enough experience to work smoothly and efficiently, so what’s the point in changing to another job? They also firmly believe that anyone who wants to excel in his specialty has to work hard on the same post for years to acquire the required skill and knowledge. Many people think otherwise. On the one hand, if the present job can offer neither satisfactory working conditions nor future opportunities, they will not hesitate a moment to leave. On the other hand, they hold that life is only once and job-hopping can provide rich and exciting experiences. My own opinion is that job-hopping, in this fast-developing information era, has become more common and acceptable. If we want to keep pace with the times, we have to change for the faster, the higher and the stronger. If life is a journey, we have nothing to regret so long as we put meaning into it. So why not make a change? 【结构点评】本文先提出两种对立的观点，而后再阐述自己的观点。第一段是第一种人的观点，第二段是第二种人的观点，第三段说明自己的观点，即同意后者的观点。第一段第一句的模板用once要比when好得多。第二句是个非常好的模板句式，它能把持某种观点的人和他们的想法用一句话就说出来。第三句中使用了also，说明这是进一步地说明这种观点。第二段第一句使用了副词otherwise，表示“不一样地”，非常简洁。此段用了一对连接词引出了两点理由。第三段首先包含了一个插入语，其次使用了两个平行的形容词，并用more来加强语气。而后的条件状语从句用两个if连续使用，效果不错，最后以一个反问句结尾，表示建议，非常新颖、活泼。 B. 范文 My View on Major-hopping People’s opinions are always different once they talk about major-hopping. Those who never change their major throughout their life maintain that they have been loving their major for years and dreaming of applying what they have learned to their future work, so what’s the point in changing to another major? They also firmly believe that anyone who wants to excel in his specialty has to work hard in the same field for