高考作文讲评课.pptVIP

* * For Class 16, Senior Three Six steps for the writing practice: How to get on with our parents Step 1: examine the topic Style:______________________________________ tense:______________ person:_______________ Paragraphs: Paragraph 1: Paragraph 2: Paragraph 3: 议论文 （Argumentative Writing ） present first the common problem: parents care for everything how parents care for everythign of us the way to solve the problem Step 2: list the main points the same problem care for everything make the generation gap deeper worry about everything make us grow up healthily and live happily more understanding between… Step 3: make some sentences: We have the same problem. Our parents care for everything of us. They always tell us what we should do. They do not let us do what we like to do. The generation gap is deeper. The purpose is to make us grow healthily and happily. We are part of their life. We carry their hope and expectation. We should understand each other. In this way, we can get on well with each other. Step 45: connect the sentences and make some appolishment. Step 6: Copy it out carefully and clearly. Proof reading (find out 5 errors) Our parents concern about everything that we have done, which make us annoyed. They always worry about everything and everybody, such as our study, entertainment and friends. As is often the case, they sometimes look our diary without our permit. “It’s good for you.” explain they every time we ask them why. Children as we are, there are some basic personal rights, which should be protected. How to get on well with our parents? It’s a problem. However, there is no reason for us to be against to our parents just because of it. Only when we try our best to communicate with them can we make each of us understand. It’s your sincerity and patience can call their respect on you. Why not have a try? _______ makes _____ read ___________ permission ＼ ∧ that Suggestions for makin