正课第四次笔记小作文动静态.pptx

总结地说出来，不要用数据说出来， 但不能一点数据没有;动态图要写的东西 1最高 2第二高，第三高... 3上升下降 4不同对象对比同的和不同的;开头段改写题目;1最高级2过去式3句子结构4after which一般在时间后 5expenditure是强调花费的数字，expense强调花费的 项目;总结段（最重要）;accounted for一般不用在两个修饰成分的句子中， 因为出现重复（两个british visitors）;Ⅱ静态图 强调比较，不强调趋势;1whereas，other nationalities替换词 2or so 附近，前面有around了 3数据能归纳就归纳;1.The bar chart gives information about the usage of different forms of transport used by tourists in New Zealand in 2004. 2.It is clear that cars were the most popular form of travel for visitors from these countries, except those from Korea. Up to 70% of British travellers travelled by car, while around six in ten tourists from Germany, Japan and Australia were fond of driving. Travelling by coach was the next choice in these four countries, with figures varying between 50% and 60%, and the favourite means of travel for Korean tourists (60%). 3.Travelling by air or ferry was less popular. 40% of British tourists and 35% of Australians travelled by plane, whereas the figures for visitors of other nationalities were even lower at 20% or so. There were substantial differences in travelling by ferry, ranging from 50% for Japanese tourists to 20% of travellers from the UK. 4.Overall, tourists from these five countries were more likely to travel by car or coach than use other forms of transport when they travelled in New Zealand. ;对象：男女，事情。 主要写 男女在某一件事情上的对比 如:男性主要是出去工作，差不多是 女性的一倍;这里trips不能换，因为此含义换不了别的。 一定要知道数据代表什么，否则替换就是错的