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创造闪光点 阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中关注同学们的用词和句型的使用。 一. 高分作文标志： 1.字数：120-150字； 2. 是否长短句交叉； 3. 关键词是否换用， 切勿老用重复词；4、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够 吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 二. 高分作文注意事项： 1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要 总是用we / I We should pay attention to… Attention should be paid to…; We should lay/put emphasis on… Emphasis should be put/ laid on… We should attach great importance to… Great importance should be attached to… 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中 间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如 however / therefore /for example/I believe/it seem做插入语放在 中间，一般放在主语之后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说：Other individuals, however, take the attitude that… 3.一定要学会换词，用形象，具体的代替宽泛的。(考试中一般不要 出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion等等)比如 上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge代替 enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 1. I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. 2. The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! 3. For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email. 4. As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a po