雅思大作文 强化写作过程.pptVIP

雅思写作考前冲刺一 内容： 1）大作文写作要点梳理（评分标准） 2）写作过程注意点 3）论证框架补充 4）互动写作 5）课后写作作业 高能低分的原因 1）审题失误 漏题 偏题 2）框架失误 大作文的评分标准 任务完成 内容切题（不漏题、不立体） 立场鲜明并得到有效阐释（明确表态，有有力的论据） 结构有逻辑性 连贯与衔接 连接词的运用 词汇资源 有一定难度的词（适当运用大词） 近义词替代（多样性） 语法多样性和准确性 句子结构的准确性（语法正确：分词） 句子结构的丰富性（长短句，句子开头不同） 句子的长度和难度（每个段落有长句） 用词的正式性和严谨性（没有口语词） 作文的审题 一、漏题 题目较长，考生容易漏掉其中的某些重要信息。 Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 分析：主题关键词为environmental problems，涉及的主体为三类：individual countries, individual persons, international level。这三类主题在作文中都必须要提到。 分析练习 2) Some people believe that students should study in groups. Others think that they should study alone. What are the benefits of studying in groups and studying alone? Which way is more effective? 哪些为关键概念词汇？ 2) Some people believe that students should study in groups. Others think that they should study alone. What are the benefits of studying in groups and studying alone? Which way is more effective? 二、跑题 第一种情况：题目不难，但是由于考场紧张，想偏了跑题。 Competitiveness now is very important to the society. Is competitiveness positive or negative to the individual? 正确焦点：对个人是积极还是消极，并在论述积极影响时候肯定起对社会的重要性。 失误焦点1：要竞争还是要合作？（X） 失误焦点2：竞争和合作对个人和社会的作用（X） 第二种情况：题目很难，没能看懂，理解出现偏差 Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 误读：资本惩罚，罚款，经济惩罚等对控制犯罪的作用。 审题步骤 审题时间：2分钟 四步： 1）明确题目类型和论证框架 2）判断问题数量 3）寻找关键词汇 4）列出简要提纲 1：明确题目类型 论辩型题目：Argumentative 包括： 1）给你一个观点，问你是否同意并说明原因 2）给你两种观点，问你支持哪一方 3）讨论某事物的优缺点 问法： To what extent do you agree or disagree? Do you agree or disagree? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages? What do you think? Discuss both views and