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The?illustrations?below?show?how?chocolate?is?produced. Summarise?the?informaiton?by?selecting?and?reporting?the?main?features. 【高分范文点评】 The?diagram?shows?the?stages?in?the?process?of?making?chocolate.【所有的小作文第一 句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process：整个过程,?stage：阶段，step：步 骤】 Chocolate?comes?from?the?cacao?tree,?which?is?grown?in?parts?of?South?America,?Africa and?Indonesia.【开头不能冲上来就直接介绍?cacao?tree，而是通过主题词?chocolate?引出， 否则显得太唐突】【流程图特点之一：介?绍过程要使用一般现在时】【流?程图特点之二： 大量使用定语从句，将有关联的两句话连接。】【流程图特点之三：大量使用被动语态】 The?tree?produces?large?red?pods?which?contain?white?cocoa?beans.?Firstly,【流程图特点 之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】when?the?pods?are?ripe,?they?are?harvested,?the beans?are?removed?and?they?are?fermented?for?several?days?in?large?wooden?boxes.【三 个句子的并列：“句子?A，句子?B?and?句子?C”。】During?the?fermenting?process,?the beans?turn?brown.【流程图特点之五：要?适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接 读出来的的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自 己的主观观点，否则会扣?分】 Next,?the?brown?beans?are?spread?in?the?sun?to?dry.?They?are?then?put?in?large?sacks?and transported?by?train?or?lorry.?After?this,?the?beans?are?taken?to?a?chocolate?factory?where they?are?roasted?in?an?oven?at?temperatures?of?between?250?and?350?degree?Celsius. After?being?roasted,?the?beans?are?crushed?and?the?outer?shell?is?removed.?This?part?is not?needed?for?making?chocolate.?Finally,?the?inner?part?of?the?bean?is?pressed?and?liquid chocolate?is?produced. 【流程图特点之六：一般不需要写总结】 最后再总结一下流程图的特点： 特点一：现?在时 特点二：定语从句 特点三：被动语态 特点四：顺序词 特点五：适当添加 特点六：无总结 雅思流程图范文《砖块的制作》(含?9?分范文?及考官点评） WRITING?TASK?1 You?should?spend?about?20?minutes?on?this?task. The?diagram?below?shows?the?process?by?which?bricks?are?manufactured?for the?building?industry. Summarise?the?information?by?selecting?and?reporting?the?main?features,?and make?comparisons?where?relevant. Write?at?least?150?words. Brick?manufacturing *?Clay:?type?of?sticky?earth?that?is?used?for?making?bricks,?pots,?etc. 【满分范文】 The?process?by?which?bricks?are?manufactured?for?the?building?industry?can?be?outlined?in?seven consecutive?steps.?First?the?raw?mater