新目标人教版英语八年级上册《Unit 3 I m more outgoing than my sister》写作素养提升练习试题.pptVIP

Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister. 写作素养提升练 人教版八年级上 正如世界上没有两片完全相同的叶子，每个人都是独一无二的。有的人性格外向，活泼开朗；有的人性格内向，文静害羞；有的人友好善良；有的人严肃认真……同学们，你发现了自己与众不同之处吗？你了解你的家人和朋友吗？让我们一起分享一下吧！ 人教版八年级上 假如你校英语报开展了一次以“友谊”为主题的征稿活动，要求大家写一篇文章，描述自己与朋友的相同点和不同点。请你根据要点提示，写一篇记叙文描述自己和好友Denis 之间的异同。 写作任务 要点提示： 共同点：short hair; friendly to other people; like to play football 不同点：I have black eyes; Denis has blue eyes; I’m shy; Denis is outgoing; I can play the piano; Denis can play the violin 写作任务 1. 谋篇布局：理清文章要素，构建文章结构。 思路点拨 我和我的 朋友 引出话题 Denis and I are good friends. He is a good friend from England. 相同点 short hair/ friendly to other people / play basketball 不同点 I have black eyes; Denis has blue eyes; I’m shy; Denis is outgoing; I can play the piano; Denis can play the violin 总结 Although we have many differences, we are still good friends. 2. 遣词造句：就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。 （1）我和他有许多共同点，但还有一些不同。 He and I ____________________________ , but we still have some differences. （2）我们俩都长着短头发。我长着黑眼睛，但Denis长着 蓝眼睛。 We both have ______________ . I have ____________, but Denis has _______________. 思路点拨 have many things in common short hair black eyes blue eyes （3）Denis比我更外向，因为有时我跟别人交谈时感到害羞。 Denis is ______________________ me, because sometimes I _____________when talking to others. （4）在业余时间，我们喜欢一起踢足球。 In our spare time, we like to ______________________ . （5）我们也非常喜欢音乐。我会弹钢琴，Denis会拉小提琴。 We also like music very much. I can ___________________ while Denis can ________________. 思路点拨 more outgoing than feel shy play soccer together play the piano play the violin 3. 巧妙衔接：利用连词，使句子意思连贯。 写我和朋友相同点时可用and 和also 罗列；还可运用词汇的重复使前后句衔接自然，语意连贯，如similar to, we both, we are both, both of us 等。在写不同点时，可用but 作为对比和转折的连接纽带；此外，还可重复使用含有than 的比较级的句子来描述与朋友之间的不同，句式的重复也可使文章更衔接。 思路点拨 4. 连句成篇： Denis and I are good friends. He is a boy from England. I’m a Chinese boy