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学生的优秀范文 （15分） AS we all know, It’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook the lunch . I always wash clothes for my family. My parents are very happy. Besides, Watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括又阐明看法） 学生的优秀范文 （15分） 2007年天津市书面表达考题 日前,由教育部,国家体育总局,共青团中央联合举办“全国亿万少年阳光体育运动” 启动仪式,其影响巨大,意义深远.你在本校参加了此项活动,请根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文. 2007年天津市书面表达考题 内容 感想 1.学校师生收看了启动仪式; 2.开展了一个小时的集体体育活动,如;跑步,做操,打篮球等 1.锻炼有利于强健身体; 2. 运动使大脑休息,学习效率更高. 3. 每天锻炼一小时,幸福生活一辈子. 注意: 词数80~100 个左右. 2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数. 3.短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句 翻译,可适当加入细节,可适度发挥,使 短文通顺,连贯. 4. 文中不得使用真实姓名,校名. 2007年天津市书面表达考题 2007年天津市书面表达考题 参考词汇：the launching ceremony 启动仪式 build up one’s body strength 强身健体 More effective 效果更好 “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007.The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony . 学生优秀范文 （15分） After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sports that we liked for an hour. Some took part in running, some played basketball and football, and some did exercises. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time. We really had a good time. 学生优秀范文 （15分） Doing sports is very good for us. It helps to build up our body strength, Besides, our brains can have a good rest after doing sports. So our study can be more effective. So why not join us ? Doing sports an hour everyday, you can have a happier and better life. 优秀范文讲评 讲评: 该文结构严谨, 思维清晰,在内容及感想间使用了不同的时态;一般过去时及一般现在时,发挥适度,长句短句交叉使用,句式赋于变化,用词得体,有很强的可读性, 文章的开头与结尾相互呼应,浑然一体,使主体得以升华.做到了naturally and clearly. 仿写 英语有一句名言“Originality is always better than imitation”有创