kwjAAA小学英语作文课件.pptVIP

English Writing 评价的标准 1、文章是否有内容？ （是否离题？是否切合话题？） 2、文章是否有标题？ 3、文章是否具有语法错误？ （是否书写正确？） A）标点符号；B)大、小写；C) 单词拼写；D)书写；E)句型、时态 4、好词好句 （是否采用名言名句，好的句型句式，是否真实地表达自己的感情？） 5、字数是否达到要求？ 看图作文 How to write a picture story? Go over the requirement（person, tense, style） Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how) Write a passage （using connectives and adding details and specific information. ) 基本篇章结构 ① 点题（时间、地点、人物、事件） ② 事件的起因 ③ 事件的发展/过程 ④ 事件的结果 ⑤ 扣题 Using connectives 并列 转折 3. 因果 4. 其他 and, both…and but, however, though, while so, therefore, because when, suddenly, immediately, as soon as , unfortunately, so…that… , finally, as a result, What was worse Sample 1 根据下列图画中 Tom 骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。 短文要写得连贯、完整。 1. Go over the requirement 1. topic : 2. Tense( generally): 3. Person: A story （a traffic accident) past tense Tom , he Tom /ride a bike Along the street/road A few days ago/ the other day/ one day 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how) 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how) A car / run fast to/run into him Tom/ fall off his bike Suddenly 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how) 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how) The driver/ frightened/ run away 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how) 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how) A woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how) Key words sentences ride a bike /run fast to When Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. hit him /fall off his bike The car hit him. And he fell off his bike. be frightened /run away The driver was so frightened that he ran away. see the accident /remember the number /call the police /be caught A woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She ca