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In the first place, the private car owners be taxed for the pollution can result in less pollution. Since the environment is getting worse among which the car gas pollution is a major one. If we can let the cars owners be taxed then less cars can be used. So the pollution will be much lighter. People can take one car together while they can not only reduce the energy but also they can reduce less pollution. So it is really a better way to that. In the second place, the car owners can lessen the heavy traffic in the big cities especially in the high time such as the time to go to work. When the cars less the time will be shorter, it’s really convinent. 第二段的第一点的topic sentence意思有了，表述有点问题，语法有错误。 第二点有点偏题，没有讨论thesis指出的减少污染问题，而是提出了新的问题，是关于减少车辆问题，有点偏题。 语言问题比较多，有的句子不通，反映出基本功不扎实： 1. the private car owners be taxed 2. less cars can be used 3. the car owners can lessen the heavy traffic 4. When the cars less the time will be shorter, it’s really convinent 5. In a short 6. the private car owners taxing for the pollution 英语专业四级考试在线课堂 In a short, the private car owners taxing for the pollution is a effective way. As a university student I support the idea which is beneficial to both our environment and ourselves. 语言问题比较多，有的句子不通，反映出基本功不扎实： 1. the private car owners be taxed 2. less cars can be used 3. the car owners can lessen the heavy traffic 4. When the cars less the time will be shorter, it’s really convinent 5. In a short 6. the private car owners taxing for the pollution 英语专业四级考试在线课堂 分数： 8分 专家评论： 1. 审题基本准确，结构比较清晰； 2. 内容上稍有偏题, 第二点没有紧扣pollution； 3. 论述不够完整到位； 4. 语言一般，词汇句式平淡，规范尚可。 英语专业四级考试在线课堂 作文评析：9分作文 Should Private Car Owners be Taxed for Pollution? Recently the government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. This has caused a great stir among the public. Some people hold the opinion that it is an effective wa