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A Travel Diary;旅游日记不能写成流水账;Sat July 14,2012 Sunny (开头)Our class visited Mount Yuntai in Jiaozuo, Henan province, on July 14th. It was really a wonderful experience. …………………………………………The process of climbing was a challenge for us because the road was not always smooth. However, we all stuck to the end……………………………… （结尾）It is such a wonderful experience that I will never forget it.;one outstanding compositions;I was so delighted that I would have an outdoor tour with my class that I even forgot to have breakfast. When I hurried to my school, I found my class had been waiting for me at the gate where we would set off at seven thirty. Since there was no traffic jam, , it took us just two hours to arrive at Mount Yuntai. ;Having got off the bus, we started our trip in groups. My best friend and I were in the same group and we enjoyed the songs of different birds and insects. ;We got to the geological museum at noon. After one hour’s visit, I had brunch and had one hour rest. At two p.m., we went on to climb the mountain. Tired but excited, we got to the Zhuyu peak successfully, where we had a good view of the mountain and took photos together.;We ended the trip on the bus. All of us felt pleased and would never forget the memory. I thought we not only had exercise but also had a good memory. What a wonderful idea! I did love the tour.;难译句子;难译句子;Appreciate the excellent sentences佳句赏析;Appreciate the excellent sentences佳句赏析;Appreciate the excellent sentences佳句赏析;Appreciate the excellent sentences佳句赏析;Appreciate the excellent sentences佳句赏析;Appreciate the excellent sentences佳句赏析;Appreciate the excellent sentences佳句赏析;The view there is so good that I’ll never forget!;Appreciate the excellent sentences佳句赏析;After we had a rest, we were all full of energy.;Appreciate the excellent sentences佳句赏析;Appreciate the excellent sentences佳句赏析