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标准文案 一． 不一致（ Disagreements ） 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致， 它还包括了 数的不一致，时态不一致及代词不一致等。 Sample 1: When one have money, he can do what he want to. Once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do). Sample 2: A driver should never race your motor without a warm-up. A driver should never race his motor without a warm-up. Sample 3: Whenone is sick, you don’t want company. 大全 标准文案 When you are sick, you don ’ t want company. When one is sick, one doesn ’ t want company. Sample 4: I was extremely sorry you are injured. I am extremely sorry you are injured. 二． 修饰语错位 ( Misplaced Modifiers) Misplaced and dangling modifiers are phrases that are not located properly in relation to the words they modify. Misplaced modifiers lead to illogical sentences that are difficult to follow. Modifiers are associated with the closest word they could possibly belong to. When a modifier slips out of place, there arises confusion. 英语与汉语不同， 同一个修饰语置于句子不 同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于 大全 标准文案 这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视， 因而造成了不必要的误解． Sample 5 ： I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. I believe I can do it well and I will know the world outside the campus better. Sample 6: A small book sat on the desk that Sarah had read. A small book that Sarah had read sat on the desk. ★修改原则 A. 避免修饰语错置的关键是使修饰语 尽可能靠近被修饰语。 B. 副词短语和时间、地点、方式等状语 从句可以万无一失地置于句首。 大全