英语作文 给xx 的一封信.docVIP

Dear manager, My name is Li Mengran ,a college student. I would like to apply for a summer job which can let me gain useful experience. I hear that you need a Lab assistant. I want to say I like this job. I study in DeZhou university. My major is Chemical. In my course, experiment is very important. So as a Chemical student, we need do many experiments. And I study hard in college, I get many glorious champion. In college, I get a chance to enter a competition of Chemical experiment. I get Second Place Award. Through I work hard, I pass the CET 4. And now I plan CET 6. As a girl, I have a ability of strict. I think this ability is very important in experiment. I hope I can catch this chance. In one hand, I can learn more knowledge, In another hand, I hope I can share responsibility for your job, let you relax. I promise if I get this job I will study hard and try my best do well . Looking forward to your early reply. . 1.1 3th May, 2012 Dear manager, My name is Li Mengran , a college student. ?[学习提示] 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院,大学”之意。 1.2 I would like to apply for a summer job which can let me gain useful experience. ?[学习提示] 易混词汇: use, apply, employ, utilize, avail, exploit 均含“使用,应用”之意。 1.3 I hear that you need a Lab assistant. ?[学习提示] 易混词汇: hear, listen, over hear均含“听”之意。 hear: 及物动词,指声音进入耳内,但不含有注意的意味,即,只要听觉正常,声音进入耳内,就能听见。但在祈使句中,hear可指有意识的行为。 listen: 及物动词,指有意识地倾听,强调行为的过程。 overhear: 指偶然听到,无意中听到,也指偷听。 好评报错 1.4 I want to say I like this job. ?[点评] I want to say: 表达不规范,太口语化,建议检查。 好评报错 2.1 I study in DeZhou university. ?[学习提示] 易混词汇: learn, study均含“学习”之意。 learn: 常指一般性的学习,尤指初级阶段的学习,表示摹仿实践的过程;着重成果时,作“学会” 解。 study: 着重指学习过程和高深的或周密的研究,尤指从书本上学习。 好评报错 2.2 My major is Chemical. ?[学习提示] 易混词汇: drug, medicine, medication, remedy, cure, chemical都有“药” 之意。 2.3 In my course, experiment is very important. ?[高分词汇] important是普通词汇,可以在某些语境中替换为高分词汇crucial或essential crucial: extremely important/critical: It is crucial that the report should be on time