Module 8 模块话题写作 外研版英语八年级上册课时练习.docxVIP

模块话题写作 本模块以“事故”为话题,涉及交通事故、毒蛇伤人等内容。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点: 1.能清楚地描述过去发生的事故; 2.能用过去进行时生动描述事故的过程; 3.能灵活使用when,while,as引导的时间状语从句,给文章增添色彩。 【常用句型】 While the lights were changing to red,a car suddenly appeared. I was waiting to cross the road. And the driver was talking on his mobile phone. So when you’re on your bike,think about the risk of an accident! Don’t ride side by side with your friends. I was walking along the street when the accident happened. He didn’t pay attention to the car opposite. Don’t use your mobile phone when you are driving. 【典型例题】 请根据以下提示,以“Keep safe in the street”为题,写一篇英语短文。先简单描述一下事故发生的经过,再给其他骑车上学的同学提供两条安全建议。 提示:今天早上,在你骑车上学的路上,一辆公交车正停在站牌处。由于你在听音乐,没有注意到,所以你没能及时刹车,撞到了公交车的后部并从自行车上摔了下来。幸运的是,你伤得不重,并且有一位路过的同学帮助了你。 【审题思路】 1.审人称:文章主要涉及介绍“我”上学路上发生事故的经过以及提供建议,主体是“我”,故用第一人称。 2.审时态:文章主要介绍过去发生的事件,并对事件的经过进行简要描述,故用一般过去时和过去进行时。 3.注意事项: ( 1 )注意正确运用过去进行时和一般过去时。 ( 2 )叙述事件时,前后往往要用提示性的语句使文章过渡自然,如this morning,one day等表示时间的时间状语。 ( 3 )当两个动作同时发生时,可用when,while,as soon as等连接。 【写作提纲】 1.按时间顺序描述事故的经过:This morning,I rode...At that time,I was listening to... 2.提供两条安全建议:when...don’t ride too fast,don’t...And we had better... 【优秀范文】 Keep safe in the street This morning,I rode a bike on my way to school.A bus stopped at the bus stop.At that time,I was listening to music,so I couldn’t be in time to put on the brake.I hit the back of the bus and fell off my bike.Luckily,I wasn’t badly hurt and a kind student helped me.I’m very sorry for that.I didn’t think about the risk of an accident.So when we’re on our bikes,don’t ride too fast,don’t ride side by side with friends and don’t use our mobile phones.And we had better not listen to music.We must keep safe in the street. 学校英语报刊正在举办“Things around you”的主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文,向学校英语报刊投稿。 提示:1.几个男孩在街上踢足球; 2.一位老人提着篮子经过,被飞来的足球击中,老人的篮子掉落在地; 3.孩子们向老人认错。老人原谅了他们,并嘱咐他们不要在街上踢足球。 One day,a few boys were playing football in the street.They had a good time.Suddenly an old man who had a basket in his hand was passing by.The ball hit him.His baske