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基础写作训练  基础写作基本要求 l.基础写作考我们什么能力? A.信息处理或整狸的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关糸或处理先后顺序等] B.组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C·连句成文能力信息内容的完整性和连贾性  A.如何处理或整理信息? 1.存在问题 (1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide john was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists especially to the older people 错误诊断:总体信息和细节信息不能合并 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. First of all, the local tour guide john was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists especially to the older people.  (2) However, the food provided in the restaurant didnt agree with many of us. Quite a few of us had to buy extra food. 错误诊断:因果关系的信息合并 However, the food provided in the restaurant didnt agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food (He had a high fever and went to see the doctor  ( )I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide john was very enthusiastic, he could concern old men in our group. 错误诊断:“一逗到底”的中式英语表达 导致信息表达出现问题,不能用多个简单句表 达多个不同类型的信息内容。 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.  ·Ⅱ.如何处理或整理信息? 按信息内容或逻辑关糸分为五大信息块 who what why when where °二、一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达; °三、信息之间如果存在逻辑关糸就应该合并, 但如果宅们之间没有逻辑关糸就不能随便 合并。 总体信息和细节信息不能合并 五、要正确使用标点符号避免影响信息的确 表达  °B.组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] 1.旅行社 travel agency 2.食物不合口 the food didnt agree with us 3.他讲解清晰,生动。 He explained everything about the places in a clear and lively way. His explanation about those places of interest was very clear and vivid.  4货真价实的购物场所 he shops where we could buy good bargains the shops where we could buy nice things with reasonable prices  错句修正 ·1.我表示对旅行社提供的服务总体感到满意 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. ·2当地导游对游客非常热情,体贴,耐心照顾团 中的老人。 John, who was the travel leader, was get along with everybody and he was took good care of the older E The local tour guide John was very en