新人教版高考英语大二轮复习书面表达.ppt

专题六书面表达  满分原则1旁观“书面表达”收获意外惊喜  母題研析理思路寻技法 再现高考真叛] [2018全国卷I] 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友 Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发 邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括 1.到达时间 2.合适的礼物 3.餐桌礼仪。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。  [直击阅卷现场 ◆首看卷面。卷面整洁是书面表达获得高分的首要因素。所以, 在作答时要做到尽量不乱涂改,字母大小合适、间距适中,书写 时落笔有力。 ◆再抓要点。语言描述全面与否是拿分关键所在。由此,在作答 时务必要兼顾要点的全面性,并且突出,让阅卷老师瞬间捕捉到 得分点。 ◆紧盯错误。词汇、语法的错误很刺眼,会让阅卷老师瞬 没有了打高分的冲动,而正确恰当且高级的表达却让阅卷老师的 好感倍增,高分不言而喻。所以,在作答时要规避一切低级的知 识性的错误。  赏读标准范文] Dear Terry DIm very glad to receive your letter about the customs of visiting a Chinese friend. Now Id like to offer you some relevant tips accepted by most Chinese Firstly, being punctual is of great importance but showing up too early will lead to an embarrassment. Additionally, @2 it is inappropriate to visit someone with nothing in hand, so preparing a decent gift for the host will be a good idea, like a bunch of flowers. @3 Finally, when in China, do as the Chinese do. 4)Bear in mind that it is impolite to eat before the host. Besides, Chinese tend to treat guests ith many delicious dishes, for which you are supposed to show your appreciation I wish you a pleasant time with your friends! Yours Li Hua  [品恰精彩点评] 作文总评:主题明确,要点全面,扩展有度:三段式结构, 段一主题,衔接自然,表达连贯,条理清晰。 出彩词汇: relevant, embarrassment, Inappropriate,are supposed to, show your appreciation等。 高级结构:①非谓语动词作状语,言简意明,如 to receive your letter about the customs of visiting a Chinese friend作原因状 。②ⅱ作形式主语,避免头重脚轻。③巧妙做到了对谚语(When Rome do as the romans do)的仿写,令人耳目一新。④通过运 用 Bear in mind that it is impolite to eat before the host句式,委婉 地提出了建议。⑤恰当运用非限制性定语从句,彰显扎实的英语 语言基本功。  ●五档考生写作● 如地wm ●阅卷人点评● 出 donet know how to hehe 本篇字迹工整美观,赏心悦 如人如目;要点齐全;首尾段精彩得当 主旨明确,结构层次鲜明;句子 加通顺,且有不少的亮点词汇和句 体型:连接词汇运用的准确而贴 sch ar gom fragrant fowers bo and Les but mot least,i5是ak如 切;语言规范且符合英语习惯。 4的4号属于五档(21~25分)水平。 她M如8m然 k Li Hue  ●四档考生写作● ●阅卷人点评 Dear lara Ha ar yor doing lady? ia nue to yr 本篇字体欠佳但卷面整洁;虽 Chiness home. Im kniting to introduces 缺失“礼物的罗列”,但主要内容 gess to the ben 齐全;所用语法结构