英语四级作文题型和模版讲解.ppt

英语四级作文题型和模版讲解;第一部分 四级作文的评分标准和要求;四、评分标准： 1．作文题满分为15分。 阅卷标准共人为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。 2分-----条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分-------基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。 8分-------基本切题，表达思想比清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多。 11分-----切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分------切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误。 阅卷人员根根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为某一分数文件次（如8分）相似，即定为（8分）；若认为稍优或劣于该档次，则可加一分（9分）或减一分（7分），但不得加减半分。 ? 字数不足应酌情扣分： ; ? 一、四级作文的段落基本结构： ; ? 二、全文(议论文)基本结构： ;第三部分 常见的错误和问题 注意方面： 1．切题 2．结构（三段式） 3．落题快（主题句在每段句首，不要绕圈） 4．长度（120－150字，卷面第二页中间或到三分之二处，不要过多） ; 基本句型： 主谓：I succeed. 主谓宾：I like Caicai. 主系表：ZY is smart. 主谓双宾：Wei Xiaobao gave Ake an English dictionary. 主谓宾宾补：Tulongdao makes many people selfish. ;大家学习辛苦了，还是要坚持;第四部分 写作中的常用句式;第四部分 写作中的常用句式 一、开头常用语式(主题段的引入) A proverb says… As the proverb says… Some people say that… Many people believe that… It is generally believed that… We all know that As we all know … It is quite clear that Various views exist as to …, but… There are many arguments/opinions/views about…;例1 My View on Animal Communication Many people think that animals cannot communicate with each other. In their opinion, they cannot speak or write. However, I hold that they can communicate. The following examples serve as proofs to support my view. 例2 1）中国人才流失的现状；2）对人才流失的看法；3）如何解决人才流失。 Brain Drain in China Nowadays, one of the most serious problems China is faced with is brain drain. While shortages of talent trouble many universities and state-owned enterprises, millions of talented people either emigrate to developed countries or work for foreign companies. At the same time, a big crowd of well-educated people who are determined to follow their footsteps take TOEFL or GRE as their passport to the West.;练习1 Smoking It is almost known to all that smoking is bad for peoples health. Scientific researchs show that smoking can lead to heart disease,cancer and other problem.The World Health Organization says diseases linked to smoking kill at least two million five-hundred-thousand pers