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步骤图： 例题1 起源：c6t3 The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 分析： 本题实际上是两个步骤图，一个描述了蚕周期改变，另一个描述了蚕茧怎样做成丝绸/丝布，当然两个图有一定联络。 步骤图写作要注意以下事项： 找到步骤起点，根据箭头方向，仔细看图，了解图意； 假如出现生词，结合图中信息进行猜测，多数生词能够直接代入； 按图中步骤、分阶段进行描述，不要省略其中步骤； 一定要使用表示逻辑次序衔接词；after/before/until/once 通常选择通常现在时，注意主谓一致，注意合适使用被动语态； 要使用并列句和定语从句来压缩合并步骤 The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm. First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again. The cocoons are the raw material used for the production of silk cloth. Once selected, they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage. Each thread is between 300 and 900 metres long, which means they can be twisted together, dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving stage. Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process. 163 words 考官作文已经很好处理了刚才我们提到两个问题，下划线部分已经给我们了很多启示。现总结以下： 首先，步骤图中最关键是使用合适衔接手段，首先增强文章连贯性，其次，能够避免写太多简单句，使句间语法关系增强。 表示时间次序 first; first of all; in the first/initial stage; //second; next; then; afterwards; thereafter; //finally; //at the same time; simultaneously; meanwhile; and; and then; ——写出并列句：把句子写长最经济有效方法！ After; before; prior to; until; when; 表示限定/补充说明：三个定语从句引导词 其次，要避免句型单一化，我们还能够采取一定语言手段： 被动语态： 千万不能小觑，汉字倾向于使用主动语态，假如写作英语句子时能合适使用，必将有利于句型多样化。 考官作文里有7个被动语态或过去分词（以斜体形式标出）。 词性改变： 在写步骤图时，图中信息可能是以名词、动名词、动词展现， 我们写作时需有意识地在其三者间交换。比如，上图中food能够转换为feed, select也完全能够写selection。 出色句型回放： 当瓶子清洗完成，她们被运输到回收车间(recycling plant)，在这里切成碎片，然后倒入熔炉（furnace