地道英语写作教程(上册)-unit 2finished.pptVIP

Improve Qualities …. The two institutes have decided to merge together. 分析: merge已经有together的意思. 简洁版应为: The two institutes have decided to merge. Improve Qualities …. He could hardly control his emotional impulses. 分析: impulse 已经有emotional的意思. 简洁版应 为: He could hardly control his impulses. Improve Qualities …. Do not use any words that are already outdated or have been used too much. 2. Avoid cliché Improve Qualities …. The Scenery is as pretty as a picture and the sky is as white as a sheet. 分析: as pretty as a picture 和as white as a sheet 都是陈词, 因为这两个明喻用的次数太多了. 更好 的表达方式应为: The scenery