中考英语写作复习材料6.pdfVIP

第六篇 【写作要求】 假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在 制定的位置上，以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题，为某中学生英文报写一 篇报道，内容要点如下： 1. 目的：为贫困地区的孩子们筹款 2. 10 月23 日，星期六 3. 路径：学校—市中心 4. 简况：学生把自己分成四人一组，出发前计划好了一切，步行很艰辛，但活 动过程中大家互相帮助，互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下，筹得善款5 万多元。 5. 感受：每个人都很累，但都很高兴，因为… 注意：1. 报道须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 第5 要点的内容须用至少2 句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3. 词数80 个左右。 【优秀满分范文】 Walk for children in poor areas Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas. It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end. We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.