初中英语九年级写作指导.pptVIP

The early bird gets the worm. ---早起的鸟儿有虫吃 Let’s share a good composition! 初中英语九年级写作课 1. 审题（search） 请你确定该文章的主题，确定体裁，划出要点 (key information) 国庆假期快到了，北京的Li Ping ，想给在上海的笔友Li Lei 写 一封信，邀请他来北京旅游，建议他放松一下。请在信中简单介绍一下北京，内容包含以下几点；80-100个词左右 要点： 1.北京是中国的首都，有着悠久的历史。 2. 有许多风景名胜，长城举世闻名，每年游客众多。 3.北京的烤鸭很美味.人们都喜欢吃。 = 2.列要点（list） 请根据文章要求用简单句子列出文章要点 (key information) a.一封信 b.邀请他来北京旅游,放松 c.介绍北京 1.北京是中国的首都，有着悠久的历史。 2.有许多风景名胜，长城举世闻名,每年游客众多。 3.北京的烤鸭很美味.人们都喜欢吃。 2.列要点（list） (key information) Beijing is China’s capital. It has a long history. 2. There are many interesting places in Beijing . The Great Wall is famous. A lot of people visit it every year. 3. Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much . 3.加首尾（add） 加首尾，注意首尾呼应。使结构完整。可以采取总分总的结构，开头要直奔主题！ Beijing is China’s capital. It has long history .There are many interesting places in Beijing. The Great Wall is famous. A lot of people visit it every year. Beijing Duck is very delicious, people all like to eat it very much . Dear Li Lei Vacation is coming. I hope that you can come to Beijing. People who relax well work well. Welcome to Beijing. Yours Li Ping beginning body ending 中考作文评分标准 第五档：13-15分 包含所有内容要点；完全完成了试题规定的任务；有清晰的文本框架，较多的语法结构和词汇；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚；语言基本无误。 较多的语法结构和词汇；有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚； t 4.连接词（connect） As we know, Beijing is China’s capital. It has long history .There are many interesting places in Beijing, what’s more, the Great Wall is famous. A lot of people visit it every year. As for food, Beijing Duck is very delicio