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;一 。 评分原则;4。 字数不足者应酌情扣分。;2001年6月 Part V Writing (20 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.1.表示欢迎2.提出度假安排的建议3.提醒应注意的事项 A Letter to a Schoolmate June 23, 2001 Dear Xiao Wang, Yours, Zhang Ying;分析样卷1 A Letter to a Schoolmate ;修改分析样卷1 A Letter to a Schoolmate You can’t imagine how happy I was when I heard that you would come to visit me. We haven’t seen each other for a long time, so I am counting the days. I have arranged a schedule for our holiday.(have draw up a schedule for your holiday.). (As you)You haven’t been to Shanghai before. (I guess the first thing you’d like to do is make a tour of the city.You will find it hard to believe your eyes when you see it, for it is very modern now.)When you see it, you will be hard to believe your eyes. Shanghai is very modern. First, we will go out for shopping, and then go some sight-seeings,( So first, we will go sightseeing, such as ( visiting)Yu Yuan Garden and ( the )People(‘s) square. ( Then we will do some shopping.) If you like, we can go( and) to see some old friends. I bet they will be as happy as I am ( to) when seeing you. ( What do you think of )Do you like the suggestion I made above? If there is something unsuitable, we will talk about ( it )them when you arrive. OK? ;( By the way, don’t forget to bring )Oh, please remember to bring your winter clothes with you, because Shanghai is a little bit colder than SiChuan. (Remember to give my regards) Remember me to your parents.;评析：11分 ; A Letter to a Schoolmate 分析样卷2 I’m very glad that you will come to see me during the week-long holiday. We have not seen each other for two years. So this ti