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I demand that you should… place an order/order 一般过去式 blue 一般现在时 receive一般过去式 find go wrong 一般过去时 过去完成时 black 一般现在时 reach damage一般过去时 过去完成时的被动语态 demand apologize 一般现在时 Two weeks ago, I placed an order on the Internet for an ipod touch music player. Its color is blue and its RAM is 64GB. I received the package from your company yesterday. I found something had gone wrong. It’s a black one with 32GB RAM. The packing case had been damaged before it reached me. I demand that you should apologize to me for your mistake and give me some compensation as soon as possible. Two weeks ago, I placed an order on the Internet for an ipod touch music player, whose color is blue and its RAM is 64GB. When I received the package from your company yesterday, I found something had gone wrong. however first additionally/ what’s more/ besides/ in addition I am Li Hua, a consumer from China. I am writing to complain about your poor service. Two weeks ago, I placed an order on the Internet for an ipod touch music player, whose color is blue and its RAM is 64GB.However, When I received the package from your company yesterday, I found something had gone wrong. First, the player I got wasn’t what I had ordered. It’s a black one with 32GB RAM. Besides, the packing case had been damaged before it reached me. I demand that you should apologize to me for your mistake and give me some compensation as soon as possible.