小六英语第20讲：写作指导一（教师版）.docxVIP

PAGE 8 第20讲写作指导一 小六英语写作技巧 一、用介词短语替代从句 例： 　　原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning. 　　修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning. 　　原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right. 　　修改后：At the second traffic light turn left. 二、删除诸如who is”或that is之类的关系代词，变从句为短 例： 　　句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages. 　　修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages. 注：把句中的three parts改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词which is written in。我们经常可以将关系代词如that去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。 三、剔除你不需要