高一英语 读后续写 作文课件.pptxVIP

第一节 应用文写作（满分 15 分） 假如你是李华，你的好友王丽在最近一次考试中成绩下降，不敢面对父母和老师。请你用英语给她写封信， 给出你的建议。 要点如下： 对她的现状表示担忧； 2. 心态很重要，自心是关键； 3. 烦恼时找父母或老师寻求帮助； 4. 改变学习方法，端正学习态度。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ;Dear Wang Li, I am sorry to hear that you feel disappointed at your falling grades, which is very common in the process of study. Your attitude towards your grades has a great effect on your study. It is known that confidence is the key to success, so you should build up confidence in yourself. What’s more, whenever you have bad feelings or troubles, you can turn to your teachers or parents. In addition, it is very necessary to consider changing your learning strategies. In conclusion, get rid of your pressure and work hard, and you will achieve your goal. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua ;新题型解读;continuation writing;读后续写1.题型介绍;◆评分参考;注意：;读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力，主要包含以下四个方面：;一、在内容上: 1)续写故事首先要与原文和所给续写段落的 首句融洽，续写的每一段要与所给原文融洽度高，同时续写的每一段要紧贴所给首句的线索。 2)第二是内容要丰富，使用5个及以上原文中的划线词语，要有丰富和生动的细节推动情节的发展。;1.是语法和词汇的准确性和复杂性，教师和考生应该注意的是，首先应考虑语法和词汇的准确性，然后再去考虑复杂性。;写作步骤;[写作指导] 步骤1 概括已知信息：标明核心词、核心句，梳理语篇内容的推进方向。 步骤2 按人物、环境、情节动词等分类划线词。 ;[写作指导] 步骤3 紧扣语境构思情节，分析： 1.据第一、二段开头关键词可知,__________________________ __________________________ 2．据第二段开头关键词可知，_________________________， _________________________。;步骤4 初稿(分析原文写作风格，特殊语法结构：有时间状语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、动名词等)。 步骤5 核查字数、下划线标明原文给出的5个以上关键词语、连接词、标点、语法错误等。;三、写(the presentation);阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 The darkness was gathering as she wobbled（颤颤巍巍）in high heels （高跟鞋）along the side of the highway. The car had come to an unexpected stop, and like a normal teenager she did the only thing she could think of...get out and walk. It was cold and late, and home was far away. This could be a long night. If only someone would stop and offer her a ride. She prayed for help and dragged herself