如何写出初中中考英语高分的作文.docx

如何写出中考英语高分作文 英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点，缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数 时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确， 无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作 文，而在中考中获取高分呢？ 一、写作诀窍 总体把握，要点齐全；人称时态，逻辑清楚； 关键词汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整； 组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回； 字迹工整，留好印象；从句适量，高分有望。 二、写作步骤 1. 认真审题。 审题包括要点、 格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息， 告诫读者什么 (即 写作目的 )。 确定文体和时态。 确定文体后， 根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。 写完要点，但不随意发挥。 先草稿，后抄写。 三、习作点评 [2004 年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组 ] (14 分) Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers. ﹒ what exactly your hobby is; when and how you became interested in this hobby; why you enjoy your hobby; about your hopes and plans for the future. 写作要求： 根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 词数 60-80 。 [学生习作 a] My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old . I became interested in reading books. I like needing books Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me how to be a good person . Books even can solve many problems for me . I will read more good books to improve myself. ①改为 reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。 ② also 的位置应放在 can 之后。 [点评 ]：档次 9-11 分。 ①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。 ②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在 回答上述① ② ③问题。 ③有少量错误。 [学生习作 b] My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable . When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’tenough . So I began to read books by myself .little by little I became interested in reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world .when I read books , I can enjoy the beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true . ①开门见山、点题。 ②真情流露，理由充分。 ③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、 ④巧妙使用句型以表