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AA 作文模版 一、开头段 (Based upon a survey that……) The statement draws a conclusion that……. Several reasons are offered in support of this argument. First of all, the author cites the fact that What’s more ,the author points out that In addition, he infers that……(用于中间结论) At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be some what convincing, but further reveals that it omits some important concerns to make the argument sound. In my opinion, the argument suffers from N logical flaws. 二、结尾段 Based on the reasons I listed above, this argument is dubious/unwarranted/ unconvincing as it stands. To strengthen the conclusion, the author would have to provide evidence…….to support the conclusion. Meanwhile, it is important to rule out other possibilities that might lead to the same result and take other issues mentioned into consideration, this argument would have been much more thorough and logically acceptable. 三、中间段（记住七宗罪：养（样本不足）姐（结论错误）饮（因果无关）泪（错误类 比/横向比较都一样）二（二选一、非此即彼）等（等时等地/纵向比较都一样）茶（调 查错误） 大体结构： 1 ）First of all, Secondly, Furthermore, Last but not least 2 ）任选一句 the author concludes that….however, this is a very weak claim as(because) .. it is highly doubtful that.. the assumption fails to take into account that.. the author unfairly assumes that.. Another problem is that.. （较为特殊，仅能在除第一段以外的段落使用） 3 ）for example ，… it is unlikly that.. 4 ）Therefore/as a result/ Accordingly/Consequently the reasoning is wrong unless … without further evidence, that author cannot concludes that… without further evidence, the claim that… is groundless. 还是举个例子，第二段的写法： Secondly ，Another problem is that.. for example ，…Therefore ，the reasoning is wrong unless … 1、养样本不足（insufficient sample ） 1 ）调查样本大小不足不具有代表性 One problem of the argument is the research/survey itself. The number of participants reveals a small sample that is insufficient to represent the XX group and might deflect the actual result. For example…..(举出其他的可能情况).Un