墨东博考研英语大作文.doc

.word 格式 , 写实派 1 As is illustrated/depicted /conveyed/revealed/betrayed/shown in the picture, ( 图的内容 原则上 用一个主从句表达 , 功底 . 两句合一句的途经 ,1 AND连结 2 WHICH或 WHEREAS连结 3 非谓语 )the two pet neighbors greet each other politely and amicably ,whereas (=WHILE/ONTHEOTHERHAND)the two pets ’ owners seem to ignore each other. Simple as it is, the drawing renders us pondering awefully. ( 凑字数 , 其富余时 , 可省去 )Accordingly, what this far-reaching/thought-provoking picture depicts reflects a commonphenomenon in today ’s society:( 反映的现实 ) pets, rather than/instead of people around them, are such an indispensable part in their daily life to the point where ( 加以讲解 ) they are excessively/inordinately( 负面词汇 , 作者的态度尽在不言中 , 回避使用 I BELIVE,I THINK 之 类的句式 ) fond of their beloved animals while neglecting those who care them, which has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. It goes without saying that its symbolic meaning that (主题句,尽量避免使用 1 主 系 表 2 THERE BE 结 构 主张使用下列句型,1 NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO2ON NOACCOUNT CAN WE 3 IT IS TIME +S+V-ED 4 IT 无主句 ) indifference should be cleared up among people, with the harmonious society echoed vigorously nowadays in China ought to be weighed /taken/pondered seriously./earnestly/conscientiously Why do we lay emphasis on this( 指代词表过渡 ) several points( 名词复数 , 总分总的标志 ) analyzed below might equip us with the deeper understanding of what we are heading for. For one thing,( 分 述标志词 ) since we have to live on an on-the-move lifestyle , we are denied chances to share our feelings with our friends and relatives. For another ( 分述标志词 ), with so many dishonesties going around in our life and then indifference occurring, we might have no choice but to enjoy the company of pets. And above all( 分述标志词 ), too many tragedies - seeing someone in mortal danger without lifting a finger to save him- put on the stage in our daily life almost everyday, No better illustration of this idea touched on above can be maintained/taken/weighed than the case as lis