2021_2022学年新教材高中英语Unit3Fasterhigherstronger表达作文巧升格学案外研版选择性必修第一册.doc

PAGE Unit 3 Faster higher stronger 体育运动时刻 描述一个体育运动时刻属于记叙文文体。 [基本框架] 1．开头(beginning)——故事发生的时间、地点和人物 2．主体(body)——事件的起因及发展过程 3．结尾(ending)——结果和感受 [常用词块] 1．sports meeting运动会 2．an unforgettable experience一次难忘的经历 3．strengthen ones friendship增强友谊 4．compete with与……竞争 5．catch up with赶上 6．fall down跌倒 7．commit a foul犯规 8．improve ones skill提高技能 [常用语句] 1．We held a sports meeting in the school stadium...during which we... ……我们在学校体育场举行了运动会，运动会期间我们…… 2．At first，we were neck and neck，but unfortunately，one of our teammates hurt himself，which... 一开始，我们肩并肩，但不幸的是，我们的一个队友受伤了，这…… 3．We all thought he would drop out but what made us moved was that he... 我们都以为他会退出，但让我们感动的是他…… 4．Realising it was...that caused the problem，we turned to our coach who... 意识到是……导致了这个问题，我们求助于我们教练…… 5．We felt proud of our school basketball team although they...this time. 尽管这次……，我们都以我们学校篮球队为豪。 假设你是红星中学的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记，记述上周六你和父母一起参加奥林匹克森林公园健步走活动的过程。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．周记的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Last Saturday，I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called “I Walk，and Im Fit”．___________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ [学生习作] Last Saturday，I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called “I Walk，and Im Fit”． Early in the morning，we arrived at the registration place and signed our names immediately.A signal was given off and we went along the walking route.It seemed that no one wanted to be left behind.I walked faster than ever.We won first prize.How delighted we were! I realized that taking part in activities like this regularly is a good way for us to keep fit.Id like to participate in such activities as much as possible in the future. 点评： 1．要点不完整，遗漏图画2的内容。 2．句式单一，没有复杂句式。 3．句与句之间衔接不紧凑。 [升格作文] Last Saturday，I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called “I Walk，and Im Fit”．The activity we