外研版高中英语必修五：Module Writing and Cultural corner .pptVIP

Writing and Cultural;Writing;GUIDED WRITING ;【归纳记忆】 以下句子可供参考： 1. I’m now writing to apply for the position offered in your company since I’m planning to find a job in the coming summer holiday. 2. I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation. 3. I can help to take care of the children if I’m lucky enough to be one of the volunteers.;4. I am good at English at school and I can get along well with foreign guests if I’m lucky enough to get the position. 5. As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and I have experience of working well with children.;【写作任务】 下面是某中外夏令营活动组织者发布的一 则招聘启事。;假设你是某中学的高二学生李华，正计划暑假外出打工，寻找机会提高英语听说能力。请用英文写一封100词左右的自荐信。要求如下： 1. 表达应聘的目的和愿望； 2. 根据招聘要求自我介绍； 3. 提出一些想要了解的问题。;【写作分析与指导】 第一步：审题 该题目属于书信类应用文写作。要求写一封应聘信来介绍自己，表达应聘的愿望。书信的格式和普通的书信一样，而主体部分可以采用四段式：第一段回应招聘信息，表达写信的目的；第二、三段是主体，根据招聘条件介绍自己；第四段提出想要进一步了解的问题。 为使文章行文连贯, 过渡和衔接自然，写作过程中要注意使用一些衔接词语。 该文章要以第一人称为主，动词时态用现在或将来时态。;第二步：列提纲 1. 了解到招聘信息，写信应聘。 2. 说明自己暑假有时间参加志愿活动， 英语较好，愿意寻找更多机会练习听 说能力； 3. 介绍自己，描述年龄、健康状况、工 作经验以及志愿服务的决心； 4. 提出想要进一步了解信息的愿望。;第三步：优化句子 我是一名高中生，在即将到来的暑假里 时间充足，计划着找份工作。 【优化1】I’m Li Hua, a senior school student who will be free in the coming summer holiday, so I plan to find a job then. 【优化2】I’m a senior school student and I have been planning to find a job because I will be free in the coming summer holiday.;2. 我能用英语进行简单的交流，但我还想多找些机会提高英语听说能力。 【优化1】I can communicate with others in English, but I still want to gain more opportunities to improve my listening and speaking ability. 【优化2】I am good at English and I can communicate with others in English. However, I want to find more chances to improve my ability of listening and speaking English. 【优化3】Although my English is good enough to communicate with others, I still want to gain more opportunities to improve my listening and speaking English.;3. 我参加过夏令营活动，有一些帮助他人 方面的经验。 【优化1】I have attended a camping before, so I have some experience in h