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上海英语中考作文题目 2014 上海中考英语作文范文和点评】 中考作文点评 今年的中考英语作文题是 “明年此时 ” (this time next year ) ，黄浦区 初中英语教研员周加有分析，这道题比较抽象，给予了考生一定的 想象空间，可以说是在 “意料之外，又在情理之中 ”。周加有表示， 前几年的作文题比较多的是从学生的角度对某些事物谈感受，或者 对一些事情进行评论，比较容易套题。但今年的这道题不是很具体， 加上时态是将来式，因此对学生来说不太容易套题，要写好必须有 自己的想法，所以有一定难度。不过，今年的这道作文题依然延续 前几年的特点 —— 以 “我 ”为出发点，谈的还是学生自己，这点方便 了学生有话可说、有情可抒。 2014 年中考英语作文： 题目： this time next year this time next year i will be enjoying my senior school life .which i have expected for a long time. the life then will be .as colorful as flowers.i will take an active part in all kinds of activities in hi gh school 3.because the saying goes ” all work and no play makes jack a dull boy ” . in addition, making friends .will be on top of the list since a real friendship5.is of great importance to me. as for me, i will be definitely6.turning a new leaf of my fut ure life this time next year, and i ’ m really looking forward to it. ? 精彩亮点分析： 亮点一：定语从句修饰对高中生活的向往 亮点二：用 as...as 的比较级结构，抓人眼球 亮点三： 用到了 idiom ，而且用的极为恰当 亮点四： on top of the list 永远放在第一位 亮点五： be of great importance 名词结构更高端 亮点六： turn a new leaf of my future life 翻开未来生活的新篇章 ? 写作小 tip ： 今年中考是篇看似记叙却要叙中带议的文章。全文的时态应全部运 用一般将来时，对未来生活进行展望。全文应表达积极阳光的信念。 2014 年上海中考英语范文 1 this time next year its exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like. at this time next year, i will be a senior high student, and i will make a lot of new friends. i hope to be more independent so that perhaps i will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken english. also i will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when i am alone. life will be totally different, but im really looking forward to it. 【解析】 这篇作文需要涉及三个方面：变化、期望和自己的作为，因此文章 中需要涵盖着三点。 第二段的第一句是明年此时的变化，第二句是期望及第一个作为， 紧接其后的是第二个作为，而最后表达出了作者对变化的想法及态 度。 2014 年上海中考英语范文 2 this time next year life is changeable, and thats why everyone longs for the future, which is full of challenge as well as hope. perhaps i will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. despite