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写作指导课Topic: AnimalsFinless porpoisesNow, please 濮存昕保护长江江豚公益宣传片.f4vwatch the video and discuss: What happened to them?2. What can we do to help them?2013年重庆高考作文 调查显示，中国长江江豚（finless porpoise）受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝，目前总数不足1000只。假设你是李华，现请用英文给WWF（世界自然保护基金组织）写一封信，请他们关注这一状况并提供帮助。内容应包括：1.说明写信的目的2.简述江豚现状3.希望WWF如何帮助（比如：资助江豚保护项目等）4.表示感谢并期待回复注意：（1）词数不少于80 　（2）在答题卡上作答； 　　（3）书信格式及开头均已给出（不计入总词数）。审题应用文体裁时态一般现在时态一人称人称三段式文章结构I’m writing to ….1.说明写信的目的 中国长江江豚（finless porpoise）受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝，目前总数不足1000只要点2.简述江豚现状 3.希望WWF如何帮助4.表示感谢并期待回复 审题三步作文法currentlyat presentaffect、influenceextinct(adj.)die out(v.)estimate(v./n.)sponsorship(n.)endangered species一：精美词句1.目前，现在2.影响3.灭绝的4.（对数量、成本的）估计5.资助，赞助6.濒危物种三步作文法二：基本句式1.长江江豚受人类活动的影响而濒临灭绝。2.目前总数不足1000只。3.WWF能够在保护这一濒危物种上起作用。4.我们需要来自WWF的专家们的信息以帮助我们更好地了解这种动物。5.我们能够更好地照顾它们。三步作文法三：句型升级1.用分词做状语提升第1句。2.用高级词汇（estimate）改写第2句。3.用分词做状语合并第4,5句。Seriously affected by human activities, finless porpoises in the YangZe River are in danger of becoming extinct.Only about 1000 are estimated to be still living at present.We need information from experts in WWF to help us better understand the animal ,thus being able to take better care of them.四：成文交代写信目的Para1: 对河豚现状的描写Para2:structurePara3:希望WWF如何给予帮助结尾：表示感谢并期待回复Para4:Dear Sir or Madam, 　 Im a student from Chongqing, China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 　 Yours Sincerely, Li huaShow Time!Dear Sir or Madam, 　 Im a student from Chongqing, China. Im writing to call your attention to the dang