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六级满分作文分析 Education plays a very important role in the development of China. As is known to all, China has the largest population in the world and most of them live in the countryside. Since the economic conditions there are rather poor, many families, especially in the remote areas, can not afford to send their children to school, many children have to drop from school. The Project Hope is aimed at solving this problem so that every child of school age can receive regular education. The Project Hope mainly depends on the contributions of the urban people and overseas Chinese who care about the development of Chinas education. The contributed money will be distributed by Project Hope council to the countryside to help the children who cannot afford the education. One hundred yuan will help such a child finis h his primary education. Project Hope is a good way to promote the education in the rural areas, but it is far from being sufficient. By now, only a small por tion of the children benefit from it. Therefore, I suggest that government at all levels and people of all walks of life pay more attention to the problem and do much more to help raise the educational level of the country. 本文是一篇议论文，文中先概述希望工程的情况，然后是人们的贡献，最后作者发表自己的意见并提出建议。构思比较简单，语言也不复杂，但很通顺。 drop from school 辍学 be aimed at 目的在于 contribution n. 捐助 urban people 城里人 overseas Chinese 华侨 contributed money 捐款 council n. 委员会 far from being sufficient 远远不足 benefit from 得益于 people of all walks of life 各行各业的人 感谢您的阅读，祝您生活愉快。