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专题09 材料作文（教师版） 目录 宝山区 崇明区 奉贤区 虹口区 黄浦区 嘉定区 金山区 静安区 闵行区 浦东新区 普陀区 青浦区 松江区 徐汇区 杨浦区 长宁区 宝山区 十二、话题作文 69． Write at least 60 words about the topic _________ made me a better person. (请以“……使我成为更好的自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 生活中往往有许多人或事帮助我们成为更好的自己。也许是曾经的某一次经历或某个人使我们发现了自己的潜力与天赋；使我们由依赖到独立，敢于选择、敢于承担责任；使我们勇于面对未知，尝试新经验，主动做出改变。请补全标题并结合过去的真实经历，谈一谈什么促使你成为更好的自己，你又在哪些方面做出了改变。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Understanding other people makes me a better person As is known to all, everyone is a special unity that has his own mind and story. When facing the similar circumstances, they may make different choices. Every decision we make and every action we do make us be a different person from others. So it is very important to understand others especially when we get along with other people. First, understanding can avoid quarrels among people. If we put ourselves in other people’s shoes, we can understand others better. Second, understanding is also a self-cultivation. Everyone has their own difficulties, which means that we can’t impose our minds on other people. I always remind myself of understanding others. I think that understanding other people makes me a better person. 【详解】 1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时首先补全标题，然后根据汉语提示的内容，说明什么促使你成为更好的自己，在哪些方面做出了改变，并说明理由。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三和第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。 崇明区 十六、话题作文 80．