高考英语写作提升课堂：读后续写中刻画人物心理的五种方法（附最新模拟题实战及答案）.docxVIP

读后续写中刻画人物心理的五种方法（以性格魔水语料为例，以最新模拟题实战） 如何让续写更加走心？我认为激发读者的情感共鸣是最关键的。最便捷也是最常用的手法就是对心理活动的刻画。我以小说Personality Portion为例，谈谈刻画心理活动的五种途径。最后再实战一篇最新的模拟题。 第一种：虚幻法——用梦幻，巧妙地发出心灵的呼唤 梦幻法，是借助梦境和幻觉的描绘来组织编写故事情节，表现渲染人物的内心世界，刻画和塑造人物形象的一种技法。梦境和幻觉表面上是荒唐的，短暂的，费解的，是违背客观事理的意念，实际上却是客观现实在人的思想意识中的一种折光反照，它所表达的内容和情景是深刻的，有着丰富的内含。 举例： She wiped another one. The match was on fire and there was a light. The light fell on the wall, where it suddenly became as transparent as gauze, and she could see the room all the time. The table was covered with snow-white tablecloths, delicate plates and bowls, and the roast goose filled with apples and plums was smelling. Even better, the goose jumped off the plate, with knives and forks on its back, and swayed across the floor, all the way to the poor little girl. Then the match went out again, and there was only a thick and cold wall in front of her.?? 她又擦了一根。火柴燃起来了，发出亮光来了。亮光落在墙上，那儿忽然变得像薄纱那么透明，她可以一直看到屋里。桌上铺着雪白的台布，摆着精致的盘子和碗，肚子里填满了苹果和梅子的烤鹅正冒着香气。 更妙的是这只鹅从盘子里跳下来，背上插着刀和叉，摇摇摆摆地在地板上走着，一直向这个穷苦的小女孩走来。这时候，火柴又灭了，她面前只有一堵又厚又冷的墙。《卖火柴的小女孩》 虚幻法我细分为两种： 1.想到和看到什么虚幻的景象。一个人的想象基本是被视觉触发的，正如上面的例子。（即：视觉，想法） 2.想到和感受到什么虚幻的景象。一个人的想象可能触发到身体部位的感受（即：视觉，感觉，触觉，嗅觉）。 以小说Personality portion为例： 1. In his imagination, he pictured what would happen next if he was Kit Kane. ??? Kit stood up and pulled Wicks out of his seat by his jacket. ? ? ‘Why?doncha pick on someone your own size, dogsbreath?’ he drawled. ? ?? ‘D-d-don’t hurt me,’ stammered Wicks. 点评：Danny被人欺负后，幻想自己是书中的主句Kit会怎么猛揍Wicks。 2. He began to imagine himself in the part of Bugsy. He’d borrow his dad’s old suit and wear a hat pulled down over one eye. He’d chew gum and talk in his Kit Kane accent. 点评：Danny幻想自己能担任校园剧的主角后的模样。 3. Danny felt scared but also reckless. It was as if the potion had released a cork inside him. 点评：Danny想象魔水发挥了作用了。用了句型：It was as if… 4. He walked away feeling two metres tall. He had spoken to Laura Mills. After a whole year, he’d finally spoken to her. And she hadn’t laughed at him; she’d talked back. 点评：Danny想象自己两米高，并且