读后续写课件26张-2022届高三英语二轮复习.pptxVIP

Continuation WritingTo showVSTo tell 眼泪The moment/ instant She spotted/ caught sight of me, She felt unbelievable It was so unbelievable that Seeing her son, she couldnt help with tears in her eyes.看见很久未见的儿子 激动 tears streaming down her cheeks眼睛he made his eyes wider. 脚stamping her feet with excitement.To show to write with more sensory (感官的） details, allowing your readers to hear, see, taste and smell the same things your characters are experiencing.My mother was hopeful.to tell :to show:My mother’s eyes were sparkling with hope.sparkle v. reflect brightly 发光，闪光写作建议：心理描写要抓住眼，嘴，手，脚等身体部位具体描述，会更加传神！Her face lit up with pleasure.Her face was shining with joy.His eyes twinkled with happiness.Her heart leapt/ beat/ pounded（狂跳）/ raced wildly with excitement.My throat tightened and my knees felt weak.His voice trembled with fear.My stomach twisted and turned inside.The horror sight made my hair stand on end.Mother was lovely and beautiful.to tell :to show: To Mother Very gently she walked near, with breeze kissing her hair. I saw a figure like a lily, lonely and fair, with fragrance filling the air.词汇： v， adj. 和 adv. 运用句式: with +n.+-ing 修辞手法： 拟人 (personification) 明喻 (simile) 暗喻 (metaphor)写作建议：外貌描写要抓住人物主要特征和眼神，头发，走路姿态等详细刻画，运用动词，形容词和副词及高级句式，采用拟人，比喻，夸张等修辞，会更加立体！to tell :to show:It was raining hard.Thunders roaring and icy biting rain violently beating against the windows, I could barely hear any voice.— Mike was nowhere to be found.roar v./n. 咆哮，轰隆 the roar of the trafficbiting adj. 刺骨的the biting wind写作建议：环境描写要抓住风雨，河流，阳光等自然景象具体描述，采用拟人的修辞，借助具体动词，会更加生动！关于“走”具体性动词一般性动词 __________________into/ out of the room ________ onto the stage_________ up and down________on the street aimlessly________________ into the store_______one’s heavy feet/legs________ into the bedroom come go walkrunslide/steal/ sneakstep pacewanderrush/dash/ chargedragtiptoesummary1.心理描写要抓住眼，嘴，手，脚等身体部位具体描述。2.外貌描写要抓住人物主要特征和眼神，头发，走路姿态等详细刻画，运用动词，形容词和副词及高级句式，采用拟人，比喻，夸张等修辞。3.环境描写要抓住风雨，河流，阳光等自然景象具体描述，采用拟人的修